Not bad, but it's missing something
That was pretty good. The acting was decent, and the editing was great. But it needed music, or at the very least, some kind of ambience to give it the feel of being somewhere other than being in a quiet, boring room.
I also noticed quite a few puffs. I'd recommend a windscreen of some sort.
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